In the morning;She is looking at the wrong side, he is looking at the wrong side.
They see nothing.
At noon;
She is looking at the right side, He is looking at the wrong side.
She sees the back of him.
In the evening;
She is looking at the wrong side, he turns towards the right side.
He sees the back of her.
At night;
She turns towards the right side, he is looking at the right side too.
They see nothing but the right stuff in each others eyes.
Next morning;
She is... he is...
10 comments:
These people need to have their eyes examined! Maybe relationship counciling is in order, as well! ;)
i agree wid david. if they see the right sides only at night, they badly need a councelling.
no help! no comment.(is a comment)
mariamusic.
I think they just look at the right side at nights!J/K
I agree with David too.
Either I am miles away from what you say or ...
This piece of poetic creation is all positive and there is nothing wrong with it. I wonder where the counselling etc comes from.
:) that was cute.. atleast in the end they saw the right side :) nd saw the right stuff too.. its never too late u know..
i'm here for the first time n like ur blog a lot.. especially the variety and strength of ur words..
david - lol. Who knows what happens the next morning? maybe...
dew drops - maybe they only needed some time to find the right side & their need towards it & the next morning ... happens!
mariamusic - :-)
spooky - :-) night-vision cameras ;-)
Behrooz - The story ends with ones openion of the next morning :-) & you are no where far at all mate :-D
Kishley - yep some people die to experience it for once! Thanks for the note dude.
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It is a success when they see at least something per day. I think no counselor is needed.
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